Ive been writing the new draft of the script which currently is aweful but slowly is coming togther. I definitely think writing in an episodic way will let me get a better idea of the pacing and how to do the story.

anyway have a read


Act 1 

Scene 1

Sepp : Hey…looks like it’s just us.

June : Looks like it (giggles) 

Sepp : Did you enjoy the ceremony?

June : Hahha fuck no… these traditional meetings feel empty to me especially as they never include me. 

Sepp : Yeah…I know…they are wrong for that…you should definitely be front and center

June : front and center? I don’t think I want to be verified to that extent.

Sepp : well Maybe It would make me pay attention a little more …closely

June: ….oh and why would that make you pay a little more attention 

Their bodies are closer now, almost touching. Almost breathing on each other.

The sky cracks in half as the long forgotten voice of a lost GOD returns to earth.

The air began to resonate as it shifted through the atmosphere of carbon nitrogen and oxygen. The make up of life changed unbeknownst to anyone.

June : What the fuck was that? 

Sepp : (covering her head) Jesus sounds like the whole sky exploded.

June is already running to a window. There are a lot of murmurs in the bar.

June looks out the window but sees nothing

A few others who were in the room have also run to the window. 

No one says anything as they stare transfixed outside.

Sepp : (after catching up) Do you see anything?

Sepp comes close to them and holds their arm. It’s the first time they have touched all evening

June : (wrapping her arm under the waist of Sepp) No…but I feel like…(they look at Sepp and notice the anxiety on their face)…Hey are you ok?

The air was charged. Like a thick soup of static. As the voice wrapped itself around the planet and began to touch the ground the static rose on the skin of their backs. 

June’s hair was floating as though she was submerged in water.

Everyone looked at her but their hair remained normal. 

A buzzing sound could faity be heard.

June : It feels like I’m surrounded by electricity (they stop and listen)…can you..(they listen again)…do you hear something?

The buzzing sound gets louder.

Sepp : Let’s get away from the window.

The buzzing sound can be heard by everyone now. Although it had begun as an auditory experience, its frequency had begun to resonate within their bodies.

June sinks to the floor feeling a wave of nausea as their organs shake with the sound

June : Sepp I…I…

A pulse shook through the ground.

Sepp falls to the ground beside june.

The two bury their heads into each other’s shoulders.

They scream in unison as they expect the building they are in to fall in on them.

And then suddenly 

everything stops

June: Are you still here…

Sepp: I’m with you…im with you

Their heads rise to meet each others gaze.

They are only an inch apart

The other members in the room are all standing against the walls as if the pulse had not been felt by them.

Their gaze fixed on the two holding on to each other

They watch them in silence.

June : Sepp…

Sepp leans in whispering 

Sepp : Don’t leave me tonight

kissing June.




Act 1 

Scene 2

A radio is playing in a bedroom with june asleep in bed.

Whats more sensible religion or atheism 

Radio : ….and surely No one was able to sleep in such a painfully traumatic freak weather event, a phase of extraordinary awe full weather. 

Call in person: I called the next morning as I was due to go into surgery and now I’ve been told I need to rebook, and rebook means I loose 100 percent of the amount we paid for…

Radio Host: …but you surely know that they don’t want to operate on you if this could happen again…it is disgusting however that you have to repay for…

Call in person : My surgery is life saving…there is no other date…I don’t have that time….unless i go to a private surgery…which is what we have to do now and that’s going to cost me everything, I want to go to small claims….

Radio : look if you went to the hearing I am not sure you would win I’m afraid and that’s all the time we have for you… our next caller says they have some background info into this freak weather….Hi Lady Da

Call in perso :…Don’t say it…not you…not yet not every…

Radio Host :…okay

Lady Da : The Fabric of The earth has changed

Radio Host : oh hear we go 

Lady Da: from small wood to the largest group It will grow and those that don’t grow with it….wont grow at all

Radio Host : ok….so Sometime we get people like you and I am half tourn if we give you air time or not…i mean the rating love…..

Sepp walks into the room fully dressed

Sepp : Hey wake up….we overslept 

June : mmmmmmmmhmm…

Sepp : Get up please I need to go now

June : Just go without me….i leave later

Sepp : No I don’t want to do that June

June : Ugh why not….

Sepp : Did you forget my name….

June : (June blushed) …There were a lot of names at the ceremony…and I was talking more to your other ….lips…

Sepp : Oh….Shut up (giggle) look we have to go right now…I’m sorry you need to leave

June : What tine is it 

Sepp : Go 

June : (annoyed) What?  Ok why are your being so rude…what’s going on.

Your suddenly asking me to leave out of no where…

Sepp : I can explain….

June : wait…hold up…explain…oh no 

June gets up and starts to put on clothes

Sepp : look we can talk late..

June : fuck you 

Sepp : its not THAT…ITS not June look at e

June : It’s not WHAT?….It’s fine you just wanted to try out….i get it…come one June why did you think this bitch would even be

Sepp looks outside the window 

Sepp looks through the window

June : If you wanted to try it why did you have to do it with ne…COME ON JUNE 

Sepp : June…

June : I want you to listen…This is 

Sepp opens the curtains 

The vision of a inverted atmosphere meets them

June : HOLY FUCK…..

Sepp : Do you feel that?

June : That pull?

Sepp : What…No…It’s like a 

June : WHy is the sun….Black

The door slams shut and footsteps approach the door 


The door is swung open 

He stairs at them 

AOEDEN: ..sky…


Act 1

Scene 3

June is on their way to the bus stop. It’s busy, everyone is outside. All work and schools have been shut due to the dangerous weather.

June is on the phone with a cordless headset

It’s very early 

It calls and first goes to voice mail 

June : Ah fuck come o pick up

Calls again.

No one picks up.

June : Alone again…what the fuck did you expects…you deserve

The phone rings 

June : hello

Pussydon (through the phone): …hey are you ok…its 5 in the morning…

June : its an emergency…

Pussydon :…ummm….What do you neeed?

June : I mean…ok there are two

Pussydon : Bitch you know Ive just gotten up and the only emergency I can think is about you late night date with the Lady from the ceremony 

June : Have you looked outside?

Pussydon : Don’t hold out on me with this mess…I need to 

June : Just open the window…

Pussydon : Ok, If i do it slow enough maybe you’ll be able to tell me what happened with whoever she was

June : I…It was bad…


June: She…I dont know…she was just…using me

Pussydon: sooo… it was a one night stand?

June: Yeah….until her man came home

Pussydon : What….in the act? Oh my god

June: No no. In the morning I mean look at the time its fucking 9 am…he came home because of the whats goin on…i mean BABE LOOK OUT SIDE

Pussydon: Okay okay..but are you ok?

June: Im…ok…I just feel that this will always happen like whenever i think a girl is really interested something is always fucked up…im so tired of being alone…like are we

Pussydon: Holy fuck…JUNE what happened?

June: What im telling you….


June: Oh….yes I told you…

Pussydon: …its true…(overlapping)

June:…this happened last night you didnt feel the shake?…and wait whats true

Pussydon: COme over….now

June: I am gonna go home I need to call my mum 

Pussydon: I need you to come here

June: Why?

Pussydon: Look when you come illl explain

->go home

->go to Pussydon’s

Act 1 

Scene 4

->go to Pussydons 


On the way to Pussydons june listens to the ending of the radio show 

What is more sensible- a show that discusses the reason why one way of living may be more sensible then another.

The current discussion is weather it is healthier to believe in spiritual significance or if logical thinking is a healthy approach to unexplained supernatural phenomenon

Around 2 mind into it they leave the bus and take off their head phones and walk towards Pussydons house 

They turn the corners and walk towards 

The house 

There is a bunch of people outside of the house of pussydon 

June takes her headphones off

The crowd are visibility animated and pointing down the road

Following their finger it seems as though they were pinting to wards the trees in the distance 

The trees linger in the distance staring back 

A light glow can be seen in the forest 

As though a fire burnt in the branches

June reaches the group 

June : Hey…hey…what’s going on?

Random people : we are going now….you know….you know…ok

They leave

Pussydon watches them leave eyes locked on 

Something else had been left in their place that seems so much bigger 

June: what’s that all about…

Pussydon: We gotta go…walk and talk

June:…what’s up girl

Pussydon: I mean I don’t know how to say it…something is in the forest

June: Something….

Pussydon: soemthing that wasn’t there but is now

June: You’re being way too cryptic 

Act 2

Scene 1

Scene starts with a radio show presenting the facts of the day 

The sound of a scene of commotion can be heard over the commentator who are processing the scene. Sirens and shouts often pierce the reporters voice. They are having a hard time dealing with it and keeping a composure (when an Abuser makes you act as though nothing is happening)

Reporter: I am reporting from the edge of the forest which id being coordined off as I speak.  (Hard swallow) For the good of us…for our good I am told to say that…everything is fine. Some of my early panicked news reports were my fault…its my fault…i am sorry….sorry…illl do better… (muffles)

It’s believed that there could be some form of contaminate in within the forest. Something that wasn’t there before, somethings that should not be there….

My co-star REVEN Gnorw will report from the helicopter. Hi REVEN…what are you skiing 

The loud sound of the helicopter fights with the reporter 

Raven : Hey all, looking from above we have a visual on something obscured by the trees. It’s glowing its…oh god I wish you could explain this to me…they are slowly cutting away the branches and….revealing more of it and….its….

Cut off 


Scene 2

June and Pussydon are Quarentined in a quickly put together inflatable quarantine building 

There is a feeling of contentment as there is no communication about what’s going on. 

A person wearing a hazmat suit is holding out Some sort of throat thermometer

June :…and how much…..

Hazmat: open your mouth please

June : erm ok…Can you tell me what were doing here we need to

Hazmat:…can I just jump in for a second…your literally the last person I have to swab before I get out of here…just let me get this done

June:….really nigga?

Hazmat: Just open your mouth please

June: I don’t have to do anything you tell me (she clearly shaken and reminded of past events)

Pussydon: She’s not gonna do it…we aren’t here for this

Hazmat: My job is to keep you alive to make sure

June: Alive?! What the fuck are going to die?

Pussydon : not in here like this

Hazmat: No no

Pussydon: Do me….keep me alive

Hazmat: What…you’ve been done..

June: wait you got it don

Pussydon: it’s mandatory if you need to piss

Hazmat: Do you want me to find an alternative way to….

Junes hair slowly begins to stand up


Hazmat suit does not notice 

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